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A rough draft is "a late stage in the writing process".1
It assumes that you have adequate information and understanding, and
are near or at the end of gathering research.
What you need:
- Adequate time period for focus
- Clear study area
to eliminate distractions,
whether other school projects or friends' demands, in order
to concentrate on the task at hand
- Notes on ideas
to include from your research
- Target audience
or a clear idea for whom you are
writing: your professor, an age group, a friend, a profession, etc.
- Preparation and research
with as much current and
historical data and viewpoints as necessary
- Review
all the above. Don't "study" it; just
refresh yourself on the main concepts for now
What you will not need:
- Title or introduction:
derive these from
your rough draft
- Reference works, print-outs, quotes, etc.
Rely on your
notes, and don't overwhelm yourself with facts. Details can be
added; you now want to focus on developing your argument
- Edits!
Do not revise as you write, or correct spelling,
punctuation, etc. Just write, write, write. This is
the first draft, so what you put down will be revised and organized
"after"
Prewriting:
Prewriting exercises provide key words, meaning, and
structure to your research before you write, and may overcome
"writers block." They help you
- Focus intellectually
clearing distractions while opening
your mind to ideas within your subject
- Narrow and define topics for your paper
beginning the
process of translating research into your own
words.
- Develop logical or architectural structure to topics you have
identified.
This provides a visual and verbal document
for reaction, review, discussion, and/or further development in your
rough draft. However, these exercises are dynamic or subject to
change in the actual writing process as you understand, develop, and
build your argument. Some topics will go, some will stay, some
will be revised
- Provide a context for "project management" to further
define the topic, set timelines, identify gaps in information,
etc.
Four exercises in
prewriting:
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Focused Free writing
- Use a blank paper or computer screen and set a time
limit of 5 - 15 minutes
- Summarize the topic in a phrase or
sentence;
generate a free flow of thought
- Write anything that comes to mind, whether on
topic or off, for the period of time you chose,
- Don't pause, don't stop.
don't rush; work
quickly
- Don't review
what you have written until you
have finished
- At the end of your time, refer back to the
beginning:
Rephrase the initial topic Repeat a word,
phrase, or important thought or emotion that makes sense.
- Review:
are there words or ideas you can
grab onto for the topic? Is there a main idea to this sequence
of ideas? |
Brainstorming:
- Use a blank paper or computer screen and set a time
limit of 5 - 15 minutes
- Summarize the topic in a phrase or
sentence;
generate a free flow of thought
- Write down everything that comes to mind to
generate a free flow of thought:
- Think of ideas related to this topic, the crazier the
better: be wild and amuse yourself; eliminate
nothing
- Make up questions and answers about the topic, no
matter how strange: Why am I doing this? What could
be interesting about this to me? Why don't I like this?
What color is it? What would my friend say about it?
- Review:
are there words or ideas you can
grab onto for the topic? Is there a main idea within this
sequence of ideas? |
Mind
mapping
- Think in terms of key words or symbols that represent ideas
and words
- Take a pencil (you'll be erasing!) and a blank (non-lined) big
piece of paper or use a blackboard and (colored) chalk
- Write down the most important word or short phrase or
symbol in the center.
Think about it; circle it.
- Write other important words outside the
circle.
Draw over-lapping circles to connect items, or
use arrows to connect them (think of linking pages in a web
site) Leave white space to grow your map for
- further development
- explanations
- action items
- Work quickly
without analyzing your work
- Edit this first phase
Think about the
relation of outside items to the center, Erase and
replace and shorten words for these key ideas Relocate
important items closer to each other for better
organization Use color to organize information Link concepts
with words to clarify the relationship
- Continue working outward
Freely and
quickly add other key words and ideas (you can always
erase!) Think weird: tape pages together to expand your
map; break boundaries Develop in directions the topic takes
you--don't bet limited by the size of the paper As you expand
your map, tend to become more specific or detailed |
Listing and outlines
This is a more structured and sequential overview of your
research to date. You may also outline to organize topics built from
free writing, brainstorming, or mind mapping:
- Arrange items or topics, usually without punctuation or
complete sentences
- List topics and phrases them in a grammatically similar or
parallel structure (subjects, verbs, etc.)
- Sequence topics in importance,
defining what "level" of
importance they are. Items of equal importance are at the
same level
Example (using this web
site):
Study Guides &
Strategies
I. Preparing to learn
- Learning
to learn
- Managing
time
- Setting
goals/making a schedule
II. Studying
- Thinking
critically
- Memorizing
- Organizing
projects
III. Writing Essays
- Basics
of essays
- Prewriting
- Definitions
- Basics of prewriting
- Exercises
- ...
- Rough drafts
- definition
- basics of drafts
- exercises
- ...
- ...
- Types of essays
- The
five paragraph essay
- Essays for a
literature class
- Expository
essays
- Persuasive
essays
-
.... |
Take a break! Refresh yourself
- Review the ideas, topics, themes, questions
you
have come up with in your prewriting exercise. Try reading the
prewriting text out loud ( a type of self-mediation). Listen for
patterns that seem most interesting and/or important. Summarize
them.
- Evaluate the ideas, topics, themes,
questions
whether by scoring, prioritizing, or whatever
method seems best. Keep this list in case your first
choice(s) don't work
- Sequence what you have prioritized as in outlining, above.
Continue
to this link for writing the first draft
See also:
Rough drafts:
Academic Resource Center, Sweet Briar College, Tips
for Writing Rough Drafts http://www.arc.sbc.edu/roughdraft.html,
November 15, 2000.
Free writing:
Elbow, Peter, Writing Without Teachers,
Oxford University Press, 1975 (on Free writing)
Brainstorming:
JPB Creative, The Step-by-Step Guide to
Brainstorming, http://www.jpb.com/creative/brainstorming.html,
November 15, 2000.
Mind mapping:
Landsberger, Joe, Concept- or
mind-mapping for learning, http://www.studygs.net/mapping/index.htm,
November 16, 2000
Outlines:
Dr. Bruce R. Thompson, Milwaukee School of
Engineering, Creating An Outline, http://www.msoe.edu/~thompson/outlines.htm,
November 16, 2000.
Price, Jonathan, Outlining Goes
Electronic, Ablex, 1999, as seen at The Communication
Circle, http://www.theprices.com/3bookOGE.htm,
November 16, 2000.
Price, Jonathan, How Electronic Outlining Can Help
You Create Online Materials, as seen at The Communication Circle,,
http://www.theprices.com/4artTW5.htm,
November 16, 2000.
Purdue University Online Writing Lab, Developing an
Outline, http://owl.english.purdue.edu/handouts/general/gl_outlin.html,
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